Thursday, December 8, 2011

Drifting Between Words

Drifting Between Words — Blue Ink Alchemy

I hear the hammers. Chisels sound like they're working rocks over. It's the sound of Chuck Wendig chipping away at the preconceptions and sorry excuses that cake around the thick skull of the writer especially after a binge of wordsmithing like NaNoWriMo. He gave me a gift on my birthday, the gift of cold wisdom, of reminding me just how badly I could fuck this up. I do like his advice on building up savings (and the liquor cabinet) while the day job is going on, but I should still be cramming more writing in whenever I can. Stealing it out of the piggy bank of Father Time while he's out mowing the temporal lawn. Digging my fingers into the mud of my schedule and scooping out what bits of time I can to slap it onto this writing thing and see if it'll finally stick. Wait, am I sure that's mud? Probably. Maybe. Smells funny, though. Anyway, even if I did have or make more time, I'm unsure as to how I'd spend it, writing-wise. I'm having doubts about the major novel rewrite. I'm debating taking the other novel in a different direction (down instead of up, novella serial instead of novel series, e-pub versus traditional) and my shorts are in the hands of editors who are pretty busy themselves. While I do have some other work lined up, the big things that I've long taken to be the solid core of where I want to go with this whole writing thing have lately come up as giant question marks. Are these things worth pursuing, continuing, writing? Would I be better off sticking them in a folder somewhere and starting completely from scratch? I guess this is the 'wall' runners often speak of. I'm getting that 'seperates the men from the boys' feeling. And I know it could be erroneous. So I'm going to keep trying to find and make the time to chip away at these things, one word and sentence at a time. Problem is, at the moment, I can't help but feel a little adrift.
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Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Regarding Ms. Lane

Regarding Ms. Lane — Blue Ink Alchemy

Courtesy Warner Bros. Pictures
Laundry nights at the Sheppard's1 have become a good place to get caught up on movies, especially in the superhero genre. Being brought up as a nerd, I do have at least a passing familiarity with many a costumed crimefighter, and recently our friends reintroduced us to the cinematic renditions of one of the most famous. I don't want to actually talk about the Man of Steel himself, though, as he can be a tad ridiculous at times. I still can't get over the absurdity of his three Kryptonian mates having vocal conversations on the surface of the moon. Even if they don't have to breathe, how will their words reach each other's ears if there is no air to carry the sound waves? Ahh, but I digress. We only watched the first two Christopher Reeve & Richard Donner films, as the second two are abominations of cinema. I did, however, enjoy seeing the Donner cut of Superman II, especially the scene where Lois Lane gets Clark Kent to reveal his secret identity by pulling a gun on him. It can be easy to forget, especially on the parts of the writers of said funny books & big-budget movies, that when she isn't getting rescued by Superman or pining after the cut physique poured into those tights, Lois Lane is an intrepid reporter. You don't see it as much as you might think, as apparently Superman battling giant robots, space monsters and a bald maniacal businessman is more interested. But a great example of bringing this aspect of the story and this character to the forefront is Superman Returns. While the film is a bit more somber and character-driven than its early 80s predecessors2, and most of its plot is lifted directly from the first movie, one thing that stood out at me is how we see Lois Lane. We see her as not just the token damsel in distress. We see Lois do some actual reporting. We watch her fight for what she feels is right, be it with her boss or the man who left her behind without a word. We get to know her as a mother. And while she does get into peril from which Superman must save her, she puts herself in peril to save him. I know there are going to be people who disagree with me, but I think this Lois Lane, the one brought to us by Kate Bosworth, may be the best one put on screen. I'm not sure exactly how much Lois is supposed to be a sex symbol in comparison to, say, Catwoman, but the decision to keep Kate's looks and fashion somewhat understated was a good one. Her moments of strength, vulnerability, doubt and resolve come across as more uncontrived and genuine because we're not distracted by her looks. This speaks to a strong script as well as good acting and mature costume & makeup decisions. Now, a lot of the good lines from Superman Returns were recycled from the first film along with most of the plot, but the emotional talks between Lois and her preternatural paramour felt new and real. Superman is a good person who's made bad decisions. When confronted with the fallout from those decisions, he owns up to his mistake and seeks ways to make things right. Lois does not immediately forgive him and fall into his arms. She's conflicted, a thousand emotions competing for her focus and running all over her face. I know there's a lot of Superman Returns that rips off Donner's work, but there's a scene or two where we catch a glimpse of some really interesting things that could have (and perhaps should have) happened with these characters. In a world where DC's rebooted most of its female characters to be vehicles for cleavage and consequence-free sex, I'll take Kate Bosworth's Lois Lane over a thousand Catwomen.
1 Not to be confused with the Shepard's place. How cool would it be to do my laundry on the Normandy? 2 Actually, the original Superman is as old as I am. How about that!
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Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Birthday Wishes

Birthday Wishes — Blue Ink Alchemy

Courtesy Valve
When this date rolled around during my childhood, I found myself wishing for new toys. More Transformers, a new video game, etc. As a teenager, the primary wish was for acceptance from my peers. Toys were a nice bonus, but what I really wanted was to fit in. It would be a long time before I realized not fitting in was part of what made me unique. Attending college, I wished on this date that the experience wouldn't end. These days I look back and know that there are people and events I should have cherished more and taken more time to appreciate in the moment. 10 years ago I was wishing for answers. I could project confidence as a young man, to be certain, but inside I was growing more confused and unsure. If I could write letters to past selves, 23-year-old me would be getting a big one. And maybe a smack in the face. 5 years ago, my only wish was for everything to stop hurting. Today, I find myself wishing for better tomorrows. Ones where I make more time to write, ones where my family and friends are safe and content, ones where my current worries and concerns diminish or cease to exist altogether. I want a tomorrow that will be better for my son than my past days were for me. And I do still occasionally wish for new toys. So I guess I haven't changed that much.
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Monday, December 5, 2011

Flash Fiction: Mind Mangles Matter

Flash Fiction: Mind Mangles Matter — Blue Ink Alchemy

To tackle the Terribleminds tiny tale-telling trial, "An Affliction of Alliteration":
The Necronomicon
Courtesy istaevan
At last. The answers were finally within reach. They'd all told him he was mad. His colleagues in the studies of the arcane and obscure, scholars like himself, had said it was forbidden for him to delve into underground ruins such as these. What would they say now if they saw him here, the flesh-bound tome in his hand, its incantations spilling from his lips as his stained fingers followed the words scrawled in blood? Nothing kind, to be sure. They frowned on this and had tried to keep him out of every library they could contact. And that was before their goons had shown up to deal with him. Mercenaries, he'd gathered. Hired from some private military company to subdue or possibly kill him. But they'd arrived too late. This ruin was now his home. He knew its secret passages and secluded corners, excellent places from which to spring with a good, sharp knife in hand. He chuckled as he looked at the corpses around the room. All that expensive military hardware, and they couldn't stop one bookworm with a sharpened piece of metal. Not that they stood a chance. Nothing could stop his destiny. One of them clung to life. He crawled slowly, his legs refusing to work since his spine had been severed. That had taken a bit of doing, what with how the knife stuck between the vertebrae when the mercenary had taken the stab above his kidney. Now the man on the floor was muttering something about a wife and child as he reached for a gun or something. The scholar made a face and, not turning away from the tome, moved to put his boot on the mercenary's head. He kept applying pressure until something broke. He didn't look to see what it was. He just scraped off his boot and went on reading. Honestly. Some people had no manners. Finally he began to feel the change. The air became charged and more thick. Breathing in to continue chanting took more effort. Giddy anticipation surged through the scholar. This was the moment he'd been waiting for! He'd never been able to get the vision out of his head, nor to quiet the voices he heard day in and day out. Now, perhaps, with the arrival of their master, they would fall silent. The chamber shook. Masonry began to crumble. The ground heaved beneath the scholar's feet and everything seemed to shift and twist around itself. It was as if reality was trying to reject the very thing he was calling forth from the void, the whole world recoiling in fear from that nameless thing once banished into the cold dark between the stars, bent on returning to devour the souls of the unwary. But the scholar felt no fear. In fact, even as the room threatened to bury him forever, he began to laugh. Every jock that had put him down in school, every girl that had turned him down because of his looks, every colleague and so-called superior who scoffed him for not being as brilliant as they – all of them would suffer. He was the only one with the mind to discern the clues that lead him here and the fortitude that gave him the means to do what had to be done. Now was his time. This old world would be swept clean by his will alone, and when the new one arose, he would be its master, just as what he was summoning would be his. There was an audible popping sound. The world stopped rolling like the nauseous belly of a child who'd eaten too many sweets. The scholar blinked tears from his eyes. He caught a glimpse, just a glimpse, of something that was at once familiar and completely incomprehensible. He thought he'd be prepared, but he found himself speechless, stunned. He'd anticipated being in awe, genuflecting himself before that which now walked the earth. But in that moment, he did nothing. He wasn't sure if he'd succeeded or failed. He didn't know if what he'd seen was an earthly manifestation keyed to ensuring his mind did not snap too soon or some sign that he'd been outsmarted at the last second by a more mundane source. He hesitated. Then something tore him open from the inside and there was no more thought. He felt no sensation other than agony. The pain tore away all his joy, all his anticipation, all his hope. And the pain did not end for an eternity.
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Flash Fiction: Mind Mangles Matter

Flash Fiction: Mind Mangles Matter — Blue Ink Alchemy

To tackle the Terribleminds tiny tale-telling trial, "An Affliction of Alliteration":
The Necronomicon
Courtesy istaevan
At last. The answers were finally within reach. They'd all told him he was mad. His colleagues in the studies of the arcane and obscure, scholars like himself, had said it was forbidden for him to delve into underground ruins such as these. What would they say now if they saw him here, the flesh-bound tome in his hand, its incantations spilling from his lips as his stained fingers followed the words scrawled in blood? Nothing kind, to be sure. They frowned on this and had tried to keep him out of every library they could contact. And that was before their goons had shown up to deal with him. Mercenaries, he'd gathered. Hired from some private military company to subdue or possibly kill him. But they'd arrived too late. This ruin was now his home. He knew its secret passages and secluded corners, excellent places from which to spring with a good, sharp knife in hand. He chuckled as he looked at the corpses around the room. All that expensive military hardware, and they couldn't stop one bookworm with a sharpened piece of metal. Not that they stood a chance. Nothing could stop his destiny. One of them clung to life. He crawled slowly, his legs refusing to work since his spine had been severed. That had taken a bit of doing, what with how the knife stuck between the vertebrae when the mercenary had taken the stab above his kidney. Now the man on the floor was muttering something about a wife and child as he reached for a gun or something. The scholar made a face and, not turning away from the tome, moved to put his boot on the mercenary's head. He kept applying pressure until something broke. He didn't look to see what it was. He just scraped off his boot and went on reading. Honestly. Some people had no manners. Finally he began to feel the change. The air became charged and more thick. Breathing in to continue chanting took more effort. Giddy anticipation surged through the scholar. This was the moment he'd been waiting for! He'd never been able to get the vision out of his head, nor to quiet the voices he heard day in and day out. Now, perhaps, with the arrival of their master, they would fall silent. The chamber shook. Masonry began to crumble. The ground heaved beneath the scholar's feet and everything seemed to shift and twist around itself. It was as if reality was trying to reject the very thing he was calling forth from the void, the whole world recoiling in fear from that nameless thing once banished into the cold dark between the stars, bent on returning to devour the souls of the unwary. But the scholar felt no fear. In fact, even as the room threatened to bury him forever, he began to laugh. Every jock that had put him down in school, every girl that had turned him down because of his looks, every colleague and so-called superior who scoffed him for not being as brilliant as they – all of them would suffer. He was the only one with the mind to discern the clues that lead him here and the fortitude that gave him the means to do what had to be done. Now was his time. This old world would be swept clean by his will alone, and when the new one arose, he would be its master, just as what he was summoning would be his. There was an audible popping sound. The world stopped rolling like the nauseous belly of a child who'd eaten too many sweets. The scholar blinked tears from his eyes. He caught a glimpse, just a glimpse, of something that was at once familiar and completely incomprehensible. He thought he'd be prepared, but he found himself speechless, stunned. He'd anticipated being in awe, genuflecting himself before that which now walked the earth. But in that moment, he did nothing. He wasn't sure if he'd succeeded or failed. He didn't know if what he'd seen was an earthly manifestation keyed to ensuring his mind did not snap too soon or some sign that he'd been outsmarted at the last second by a more mundane source. He hesitated. Then something tore him open from the inside and there was no more thought. He felt no sensation other than agony. The pain tore away all his joy, all his anticipation, all his hope. And the pain did not end for an eternity.
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Friday, December 2, 2011

IT CAME FROM NETFLIX! In The Mouth of Madness

IT CAME FROM NETFLIX! In The Mouth of Madness — Blue Ink Alchemy

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[No audio this week; RIP old headset. :( ]
There are classics of the horror genre, speaking in terms of movies, that are all about the creatures: Bela Legosi's Dracula, Boris Karloff as Frankenstein's monster, Lon Chaney's Wolfman and so on. Some horror stories move away from such "creature features" and opt for a more cerebral experience, inspired as they are by the works of Edgar Allen Poe or HP Lovecraft. These tales take it upon themselves to explore the inhumanity amongst our fellow man be that inhumanity inspired by simple madness or cosmic horrors. In The Mouth of Madness tries to be both, drawing inspiration from Lovecraft and directed by John Carpenter, helmsman of the 1982 sci-fi/horror classic The Thing.
Courtesy New Line Cinema
When we meet John Trent, he's in an asylum. Asked for his story, he relates that he was once an insurance investigator. A claim has been filed by Arcane Publishing against popular horror author Sutter Cane over the last novel in his bestselling series. After evading an attempt of Cane's agent to axe-murder him, Trent takes the case, reads all of Cane's work up to that mysterious final book and begins having nightmares. With the help of Cane's editor, Linda, he manages to find the fictional New Hampshire town Cane used as a backdrop for his stories, and soon finds himself drawn into the mad novelist's world to follow a sequence of events that may doom ours. The material and feel of In The Mouth of Madness draw their fuel from the burning coals of many a Lovecraft story, but it's hard not to notice the parallels with Stephen King. The fictional town of Hobb's End into which our heroes stumble at first seems like a sleepy, friendly little place, but is soon consumed with madness and paranoia. The film, however, does not actually copy any particular character, event or story element from any of its contemporaries or inspirations, focusing instead on overarching themes and a mood of creeping dread. "Focus", however, may be a strong word, because In The Mouth of Madness is kind of all over the place.
Courtesy New Line Cinema
I happen to think Sam Neill is underappreciated. He's brilliant in this.
As much as I appreciate movies that take pokes at the rabid behavior of certain subsets of genre fans, it was hard for me to be drawn into the story. Any time an atmosphere of dread seemed to be creeping in, a monster of one form or another would pop into the frame, if just for a moment, aimed at startling both the characters and the audience. Many of the good ideas in the plot - the madness caused by Cane's books, the manifestation of the fictional town, the Lovecraftian ancient creatures bent on returning to Earth - are lost with the presence of one slavering grotesque leaping out at us going "ARE YOU SCARED YET?" after another. It's disappointing as well as somewhat counter-productive. Creature features are very different from deeper, psychological horror. When you watch, say, Bram Stoker's Dracula or The Wolfman, you're there for the lurid drama and a spattering of gore. Silence of the Lambs or Seven, on the other hand, is meant to invoke dark thoughts and feelings in a somewhat quiet way, their characters and actions very rooted in the real while being disturbingly abnormal. In The Mouth of Madness wants it both ways. In the end, it ends up being neither particularly introspective nor all that scary.
Courtesy New Line Cinema
This scene had me laughing, not screaming, my head off.
This is a shame, as there are some interesting ideas at work. The fact that Cane's novels inspire slaving mobs and axe-wielding agents could have sparked a discussion or investigation into the affect of media consumption on the populace. The town appearing out of nowhere from the pages of a book may have served an examination of the theory that worlds created by fiction do, in fact, exist somewhere. Even the movie's attempt to transcend into a state of meta-awareness falls a bit flat due to the overwrought nature of its jump-out scares and unfocused narrative. It could be argued that this schizophrenic form of filmmaking is meant as an example of what schizophrenia itself might feel like, but even that explanation is flawed given the overall incoherency of the work. You may want to say something profound, but your meaning will be lost if all that comes out of your mouth is gibberish. While I can't say it's a total failure, In The Mouth of Madness is neither an effective creature feature nor a true psychological horror. It relies too heavily on prosthetics and spook house slight-of-hand while not quite approaching the level of surrealism that makes surrealist works like Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas or Bad Lieutanant: Port of Call - New Orleans enjoyable and understandable to watch while still being batshit bonkers. Still, Sam Neill is a lot of fun to watch as he spirals out of reality and into his own little corner of Crazy Town, so if I were to recommend In The Mouth of Madness, it would be for an evening of MST3K-style fun with friends, rather than actually watching it for the sake of horror. You'll probably get a much more palpable scare out of actually reading one of Lovecraft's stories or, failing that, some horror-based fan fiction. Though that sort of thing is terrifying for entirely different reasons, especially when it manages to sell and someone starts making movies out of it. I'm not naming names. To do so would be to invite its attention. And those fans? They never sleep. They. Never. Sleep. Josh Loomis can't always make it to the local megaplex, and thus must turn to alternative forms of cinematic entertainment. There might not be overpriced soda pop & over-buttered popcorn, and it's unclear if this week's film came in the mail or was delivered via the dark & mysterious tubes of the Internet. Only one thing is certain... IT CAME FROM NETFLIX.
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Thursday, December 1, 2011

Proper Pacing

Proper Pacing — Blue Ink Alchemy

Courtesy allthingshealing.com
I've mentioned in medias res previously. It's a great way to get your audience into the swing of the story and can cut down on overwrought exposition. However, no matter how breakneck the pace of the opening, you don't necessarily have to pound the metaphorical pavement from start to finish. You can't spend all of your creative energy right up front. You have to pace yourself. Stage performers from illusionists to strippers know you can't show the audience everything right away, and writing fiction is no different. Even in the shortest of stories, you can't pull back the curtain right away. It's a gradual work of unseen pulleys and ropes, not something yanked down before the audience's eyes. Be your story a hundred words long or a hundred thousand, be sure to give yourself time to move your scenery, get your actors on their marks, and line up your shots before you pull the trigger. This is especially true for stories broken up over time, be they serials or webcomics or a number of novels. Look at A Song of Ice and Fire, or Dresden Files, or Harry Potter, or Homestuck. In each case, recurring characters and permeating themes maintain or develop the world and atmosphere between 'episodes' in the story, allowing the audience to try and fill in the blanks themselves. Canny authors can leave clues or even red herrings for people to pick up and put together themselves, maintaining the feeling of discovery and anticipation even if it's an unreasonable stretch of time between new entries in the story. Authors must take care, however, that this sort of thing is not merely a carrot dangled in front of the audience to lure them towards some sort of soapboxing moment. It weakens the quality of the narrative itself. Smart writers can play with, lean on and even occasionally break the fourth wall, but such things must be done with a delicate touch lest the power of the story's messages get plowed under by the author's drive to make a point. It's one thing to have the writer slip a wink to the audience or chase down a troublemaking character with a broom in a moment of light humor; it's quite another when the characters become mouthpieces for the author's political or religious viewpoints, especially when the audience is young and impressionable. Characters speaking on courage, perseverance or self-sacrifice for the good of their friends is one thing; characters moralizing on abstinence or abortion is quite another. Even in these worst-case scenarios, however, you can see the evidence of good pacing amongst the fandom of a given title. There's speculation, anticipation, even fans crafting their own works to fill in the gaps. True, some will try to impose themselves on the author for answers or to influence turns in the story to come, but even this behavior's a good sign. It means the audience cares about the characters and the world in which they live. While you can't leave them hanging forever, if you get the pace right (and don't digress into soapboxing) they'll happily admit the reveal was worth the wait, even if it wasn't what they expected. So find a good rhythm, set the pace, and don't get tripped up or ahead of yourself. Short stories may be sprints, and novels & novel series a marathon, but in all cases you have to pace yourself. If you do it properly, you'll have just enough energy to cheer after you cross the finish line before you collapse into an exhausted heap.
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