So {insert title here}, Book 1 of the Acradea Cycle, is proceeding. It's in fits and starts a bit, but a little
kick in the pants from Ye Olde Magickal Speaking Beardface should keep things chugging along. At least a thousand words a day is a decent goal. As
my northern better half points out, I do that in my blog every day without breaking a sweat. But I'm coming to a point in the novel where I need to name something of relatively large importance. When I
last discussed The Project at length, I mentioned "magical mass acceleration rifles." They're a weapon being developed by the magocracy in the Cities of Light for a few reasons that will come to light over the course of the story. But the new-fangled dealers of death need a shorthand name. Mass acceleration isn't a scientific theory as such in Acradea, and calling them "metal tubes with wooden stocks etched with runes and Wards to conjure the ammunition and move it down the barrel at lethal velocity" neither rolls off of the tongue nor abbreviates well. Considering these are the first "firearms" of this world, I'm inspired to look towards our own history of boomsticks. The weapons in Acradea do have a method of arming similar to those used back when matches or flint were used to strike the gunpowder. By pulling back on the hammer of one of these new-fangled weapons, the shot is conjured into the breach and arcane energy is passed from the storage runes to the hammer, acting as the weapon's primer. Then, pulling the trigger closes the circuit between the hammer and the Wards on the barrel, starting a very rapid sequence of off/on toggles on those Wards which accelerates the shot. While not magical in and of themselves, shots from these weapons are accelerated by magic to speeds exceeding that of sound, and are likely to have decent range and accuracy if used properly. When firearms began evolving as small arms, they were known by their firing mechanisms - matchlocks, wheellocks, flintlocks, etc. "Magelock" is an interesting choice but
Privateer Press called dibs on that one. "Arcanelock" or "arcanolock" might work, or perhaps "wardlock." I'd like to try and settle on a name for them before I proceed with the current scene, as it's about to become very important to the plot. So, if you've any ideas or just want to kibitz about what I've mentioned, leave me a comment, won't you? As an aside, if you're hungry for inspiration, take a look at Chuck's photostream sometime. The man has got a great eye.
Seriously. That's what I'm talking about.
EDIT: Some GREAT suggestions and background info in the comments. Thanks, everyone. Considering these weapons were originally designed to provide long-range protection to Guardians, who don't have many options in terms of doing damage at long distance compared to evokers who can shoot lightning and alchemists who can transmute air to fire, I'm thinking... "longpro" or some other portmanteau of those terms. Thoughts?
EDIT 2: My Canadian better half said something surprisingly smart, to the effect that I'm over-complicating matters. The term 'firearm' might still work, especially if the look of the weapon when being shot has a resemblance to fire and it acts as an extension of the shooter's arm. I just want to avoid pissing of intelligent people who make arguments like the following:
Prior to the age of gunpowder, there's no such thing as "firing" a weapon, but there are all sorts of "historical" books and films that will have commanders instructing crossbowmen or longbowmen to "fire" at a target. It's a habit that's hard to avoid, but it always sets off a "this-guy-didn't-do-the-research" neuron in my brain.
EDIT 3: "Executor." It carries out the protection, or judgement, or execution of the mage holding it. And since it'll play a pivotal role in how the story unfolds, and the major complication that sets off the main story, perhaps I've finally come to my title - "Executor's Wound"...
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